tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post1742576261329963515..comments2022-03-03T11:54:19.588-07:00Comments on Smith 9H 13-14: Johnanneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-81322079704729098772014-05-16T16:13:04.897-06:002014-05-16T16:13:04.897-06:00The video took definitely grabbed my attention at ...The video took definitely grabbed my attention at the beginning, and it was all up hill from there. Way to tackle a heavy, deep topic, and make it VERY interesting. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-13833830984276063332014-05-16T13:11:04.816-06:002014-05-16T13:11:04.816-06:00Great job, John, that was a beautiful presentation...Great job, John, that was a beautiful presentation. It was apparent how much hard work you put into it. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-86915349213857587722014-05-16T12:55:57.443-06:002014-05-16T12:55:57.443-06:00You made your message really connect and engaged t...You made your message really connect and engaged the audience well with personal stories. Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-40065078458297781112014-05-16T12:50:00.239-06:002014-05-16T12:50:00.239-06:00John, amazing. Love your idea, you portrayed it so...John, amazing. Love your idea, you portrayed it so well and I absolutely agree with you I am so happy that you decided to present that, very well done you owned that stage. Although you got stuck at points you definitely did not let it affect you and pulled it together so elegantly. Great jobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-4778239902910977192014-05-16T12:48:02.674-06:002014-05-16T12:48:02.674-06:00I love your message and your TED challenge- it'...I love your message and your TED challenge- it's really something challenging to work towards. Great job presenting!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-42644845752764087282014-05-16T12:47:38.197-06:002014-05-16T12:47:38.197-06:00That was amazing! I loved the message behind your ...That was amazing! I loved the message behind your speech, and your examples were easy to connect with. Great job John!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-32885296436693763112014-05-16T12:46:50.458-06:002014-05-16T12:46:50.458-06:00John, this was a great ted talk, it really showed ...John, this was a great ted talk, it really showed your personality. Great job with the attention getter, it really got me interested! Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-89588405161670186222014-05-16T12:44:55.159-06:002014-05-16T12:44:55.159-06:00John: Great job using a video to introduce your to...John: Great job using a video to introduce your topic! I appreciated the meaning behind your speech and liked your TED challenge! Great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-63186524745237134052014-05-16T12:44:26.415-06:002014-05-16T12:44:26.415-06:00Great job! The topic was awesome and very importan...Great job! The topic was awesome and very important!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-67805003058427323262014-05-16T12:44:13.586-06:002014-05-16T12:44:13.586-06:00Your attention getter definitely got my attention ...Your attention getter definitely got my attention and helped support your topic. You seemed really well rehearsed and comfortable.Cool scientific backup about what kindness can actually do. Nice personal real world example.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-5759957086435969542014-05-16T12:44:04.066-06:002014-05-16T12:44:04.066-06:00John: Yours was a very emotional topic and it was ...John: Yours was a very emotional topic and it was obvious how much you cared about it. Both your eye contact and tone was very good as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-57910823862620200832014-05-16T12:44:03.492-06:002014-05-16T12:44:03.492-06:00John,
Good job including passion about your subjec...John,<br />Good job including passion about your subject! I liked how you paused between your points to make it more effective. Your slides added a perfect touch to it and I liked the video at the beginning! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-46563220534952533782014-05-16T12:43:49.599-06:002014-05-16T12:43:49.599-06:00John! Your introduction was great. I loved the vid...John! Your introduction was great. I loved the video. Your speech was very powerful, and I love the message behind it. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-56229424707076071782014-05-16T12:43:40.442-06:002014-05-16T12:43:40.442-06:00I loved the effect of having the video play behind...I loved the effect of having the video play behind you when you started talking. You talked so calmly and articulated very well. I love how you have so many quotes, from Shakespeare to Soul Pancake. You connected it really well why we should take this into consideration. The end was really great and inspiring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-77146299768597750812014-05-16T12:43:38.592-06:002014-05-16T12:43:38.592-06:00You did a really great job. You could tell that yo...You did a really great job. You could tell that you put your heart in soul into the speech and felt everything you were saying. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-32146614581447145022014-05-16T12:43:28.179-06:002014-05-16T12:43:28.179-06:00I really liked the content of your speech, it was ...I really liked the content of your speech, it was so touching. You spoke really well and I liked the video at the beginning, it really got my attention. You might want to add some more pictures to your slides, just to improve the slideshow part a but but overall it was really good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-14295198660890305302014-05-16T12:43:26.533-06:002014-05-16T12:43:26.533-06:00JOhn-
So heartwarming and beautiful. Seriously, yo...JOhn-<br />So heartwarming and beautiful. Seriously, you are incredible.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-65382115770880940162014-05-16T12:43:17.570-06:002014-05-16T12:43:17.570-06:00I really liked your ideas! You presented very well...I really liked your ideas! You presented very well. I liked all of the quotes and examples. I liked how you explained the benefits of being kind and loving. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-181084559886470102014-05-16T12:43:16.412-06:002014-05-16T12:43:16.412-06:00John- I feel like this ted talk really embodies yo...John- I feel like this ted talk really embodies you. The ideas you spread seem very relevant in the way that you live.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-24246816601299422272014-05-16T12:43:05.221-06:002014-05-16T12:43:05.221-06:00Your video introduction was wonderful. If you had ...Your video introduction was wonderful. If you had a bigger stage it would be even better if you could make your entire presentation in a video format. (This is my opinion and not to be taken as fact) Your meaning was not only powerful but was well supported.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-25734217375721504592014-05-16T12:42:56.771-06:002014-05-16T12:42:56.771-06:00You did amazing John!! You were so composed and po...You did amazing John!! You were so composed and powerful at the same time. I think your slides really accented the things you were talking about. carolinem2017https://www.blogger.com/profile/01081335034589501229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-28852945113457652972014-05-16T12:42:55.768-06:002014-05-16T12:42:55.768-06:00John: Great video and awesome message. You had a g...John: Great video and awesome message. You had a great speech overall. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4730202939684243890.post-23688224934453919592014-05-16T12:39:40.138-06:002014-05-16T12:39:40.138-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com