You spoke slowly and with drama. Good job!! I am so proud of you, you worked hard, and you truly reaped what you sowed. And you connected directly to the audience with your use of Arapahoe, Anthony Sitting Eagle and Warriors. Did you forget your lines? I'm asking this because if you did, we didn't notice. When you started tearing up it drew us closer and thats the best. I'm so proud and happy for you. Good job Caroline!
I really liked the way you offered 2 definitions of warrior. I love how you really had a strong connection with Arapahoe and the community. The way you got so emotional was so powerful and this was so engaging so I could connect with this speech
Really good intro. I like how you defined warrior in your own words. Your examples were very relatable and I could tell that this really mattered to you. Your personal example was very clear and made me more motivated to fill out your ted challenge. Thank you for your honesty.
Your topic rings so true to me since I was bullied in elementary and didn't want to go the hell that was school. But today sometimes I forget to watch my tongue and hope I don't hurt anyone. Your images where wonderful and added to the emotion of the speech. Great recovery from the pause after talking about the shooting.
Caroline, You made a strong connection with the audience from the beginning of your speech to the end. I am proud of you for being vulnerable to your audience and being yourself. Great job, Caroline!
Your speech really resonated with me and many of the other people in the class. I can tell it was really emotional for you and I applaud you for embracing your vulnerability. You were composed throughout your speech and showed a lot of composure. Good job.
Caroline: You had a great topic and you involved lots of inspiration, color coordination, facial expressions, and timing. You have gone a long way Caroline, so I encourage you to keep on going, however you might want to work on looking at people in steps and not sweeping. You did awesome Caroline, good job.
Felt really natural and comfortable, using Arapahoe Community so we can all relate was a really nice touch. "Being nice to each other doesn't stop where the school walls end" - really impactful, influential, and well-thought out line. You can tell she was really emotionally invested in this speech and really applied herself and her passions.
You definitely got an emotional response:) Well done and I applaud you for your beautiful delivery and very well spoken message. Clap, clap, clap... So amazing!
Caroline: I admire your confidence, and your will to succeed in your presentation. I think it came through and truly made your presentation great. Your raw emotion made your speech special. Great job.
Caroline, mind blowing. That was absolutely amazing, you brought tears to my eyes and you got up there and owned that stage and really showed us that you have what it takes and even more. I definitely take that as an information, that was so amazing. Blew me away. Your slides worked very well and you spoke so well, it was elegant. Amazing.
Great job Caroline! You speech was so inspirational, I loved it! Your examples were amazing and I could really connect with them, and your visuals were very effective ;). And your comeback from your emotions was inspirational in itself. Overall, you did Amazing!
Caroline, your speech was really good, and was very easy to connect to. I felt like everyone understood the concepts, and the part where you got a little choked up, did not mess up the speech, it enhanced it tenfold, showing that you truly cared about your topic.
Caroline, great job with your speech! I loved how you made such a big connection with the audience. You did really good showing your emotions and how you actually cared about what you were saying. Good job!
You spoke slowly and with drama. Good job!! I am so proud of you, you worked hard, and you truly reaped what you sowed. And you connected directly to the audience with your use of Arapahoe, Anthony Sitting Eagle and Warriors. Did you forget your lines? I'm asking this because if you did, we didn't notice. When you started tearing up it drew us closer and thats the best. I'm so proud and happy for you. Good job Caroline!
ReplyDeleteNo hah shockingly I didn't forget anything
DeleteI really liked the way you offered 2 definitions of warrior. I love how you really had a strong connection with Arapahoe and the community. The way you got so emotional was so powerful and this was so engaging so I could connect with this speech
ReplyDeleteReally good intro. I like how you defined warrior in your own words. Your examples were very relatable and I could tell that this really mattered to you. Your personal example was very clear and made me more motivated to fill out your ted challenge. Thank you for your honesty.
ReplyDeleteYour topic rings so true to me since I was bullied in elementary and didn't want to go the hell that was school. But today sometimes I forget to watch my tongue and hope I don't hurt anyone. Your images where wonderful and added to the emotion of the speech. Great recovery from the pause after talking about the shooting.
ReplyDeleteCaroline: Nice job including a personal story and keeping the audience engaged. You had a good message and strong points. Good job!
ReplyDeleteCaroline, that was very good. You incorporated emotion in to your talk and it helped the audience relate to you. Very good job.
ReplyDeleteI love your message... Great, clear presentation. Very emotional and touching... That was inspiring. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteCaroline! Your emotion really showed through and it was so passionate and I loved it. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYour emotional context to your speech was amazing. Truly heart felt, and it warmed the audience with your genuineness.
ReplyDeleteCaroline,
ReplyDeleteYou made a strong connection with the audience from the beginning of your speech to the end. I am proud of you for being vulnerable to your audience and being yourself. Great job, Caroline!
that was so touching and I could really relate to what you were saying. Your speaking style was so confident and clear. Really amazing speech Caroline
ReplyDeleteCaroline: The emotion and strength in your speech was incredible, and even though you rushed a little your speech flowed really well.
ReplyDeleteYour speech really resonated with me and many of the other people in the class. I can tell it was really emotional for you and I applaud you for embracing your vulnerability. You were composed throughout your speech and showed a lot of composure. Good job.
ReplyDeleteCaroline: You had a great topic and you involved lots of inspiration, color coordination, facial expressions, and timing. You have gone a long way Caroline, so I encourage you to keep on going, however you might want to work on looking at people in steps and not sweeping. You did awesome Caroline, good job.
ReplyDeleteFelt really natural and comfortable, using Arapahoe Community so we can all relate was a really nice touch. "Being nice to each other doesn't stop where the school walls end" - really impactful, influential, and well-thought out line. You can tell she was really emotionally invested in this speech and really applied herself and her passions.
ReplyDeleteYou definitely got an emotional response:) Well done and I applaud you for your beautiful delivery and very well spoken message. Clap, clap, clap... So amazing!
ReplyDeleteCaroline, the emotion that you put into your speech was so moving. Your topic was so emotional and I am so proud of you for sharing your feelings.
ReplyDeleteCaroline: I admire your confidence, and your will to succeed in your presentation. I think it came through and truly made your presentation great. Your raw emotion made your speech special. Great job.
ReplyDeleteCaroline, mind blowing. That was absolutely amazing, you brought tears to my eyes and you got up there and owned that stage and really showed us that you have what it takes and even more. I definitely take that as an information, that was so amazing. Blew me away. Your slides worked very well and you spoke so well, it was elegant. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteThe emotion you had in your speech was truly inspiring!
ReplyDeleteThe emotion you had in your speech was truly inspiring!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Caroline! You speech was so inspirational, I loved it! Your examples were amazing and I could really connect with them, and your visuals were very effective ;). And your comeback from your emotions was inspirational in itself. Overall, you did Amazing!
ReplyDeleteCaroline, your speech was really good, and was very easy to connect to. I felt like everyone understood the concepts, and the part where you got a little choked up, did not mess up the speech, it enhanced it tenfold, showing that you truly cared about your topic.
ReplyDeleteCaroline, great job with your speech! I loved how you made such a big connection with the audience. You did really good showing your emotions and how you actually cared about what you were saying. Good job!
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