You did a really good job with eye contact and have really good points. I love your introduction! Good examples with present day examples and modern text. I really liked how you broke down rebellion and why it is important. Good job!
You kept making side comments that were a little awkward but you still were able to proceed with the speech. Your use of media throughout your speech and the title were wonderful and aided your point.
Elizabeth, At the beginning you started out a little fast, but it's okay because we all get nervous! I liked how you included a video, I love that movie! You became more and more confident toward the end and I liked your challenge.
Way to not give up even though you were nervous and may have forgotten some of your lines. It was a really good relatable talk since we've discussed this topic throughout the whole year.
Great introductory slide. You brought smiles to my face. Great insights. Try to relax more, you did great but you were tense and started tripping on your words. Even when that happened you pushed on and gave your presentation with strength. Nice explanations and incorporation of real life events. You have great knowledge and thoughts. Try to run through it a bit more, you might need to work on being smoother, however you have done a wonderful job. It takes courage to get up there. You were WONDERFUL. Nice job Elizabeth.
Elizabeth: Although you were a little nervous in the beginning you relaxed and put a lot of emotion and compassion in your speech. I really liked you example with the hunger games and Chelsea Manning.
I loved your outside sources and examples- it really made your speech into something I could relate to. You seemed nervous up there, but great job in not letting it stop you!
Elizabeth, you did amazing! I loved your topic and examples, and I could really connect with everything. Your speech was truly inspirational; I think everyone can benefit from it. Great job!
I enjoyed the enthusiasm you showed throughout your presentation and how you were able to apply a lot of what we learned in the classroom this year and was able to tell you enjoyed the topics we learned and that it greatly affected you. Great speech and the connections were awesome.
Good content but if you are nervous make sure you just take a breath, you did great! You had nothing to be nervous about
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job with eye contact and have really good points. I love your introduction! Good examples with present day examples and modern text. I really liked how you broke down rebellion and why it is important. Good job!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth- Great job overcoming your nerves and rolling with your words.Fantastic ted wish and conclusion.
ReplyDeleteYou kept making side comments that were a little awkward but you still were able to proceed with the speech. Your use of media throughout your speech and the title were wonderful and aided your point.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth,
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning you started out a little fast, but it's okay because we all get nervous! I liked how you included a video, I love that movie! You became more and more confident toward the end and I liked your challenge.
Knew your speech really really well. Nice use of our education this year as well as pop culture examples. Passion in speech.
ReplyDeleteWay to not give up even though you were nervous and may have forgotten some of your lines. It was a really good relatable talk since we've discussed this topic throughout the whole year.
ReplyDeleteLiz: Nice message and interesting topic. The pictures will also really good as well.
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ReplyDeleteYou taught me that rebels make the world more exciting. Your speech was inspiring.
Great introductory slide. You brought smiles to my face. Great insights. Try to relax more, you did great but you were tense and started tripping on your words. Even when that happened you pushed on and gave your presentation with strength. Nice explanations and incorporation of real life events. You have great knowledge and thoughts. Try to run through it a bit more, you might need to work on being smoother, however you have done a wonderful job. It takes courage to get up there. You were WONDERFUL. Nice job Elizabeth.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth: Although you were a little nervous in the beginning you relaxed and put a lot of emotion and compassion in your speech. I really liked you example with the hunger games and Chelsea Manning.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth: I think that your TED wish and challenge were very inspiring and that you tied so many diverse topics together so seamlessly. Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteNice job. You explained an otherwise controversial topic in a way that was really easy to understand. Good job and keep it up.
ReplyDeleteGood job! I liked your passion!
ReplyDeleteI loved your outside sources and examples- it really made your speech into something I could relate to. You seemed nervous up there, but great job in not letting it stop you!
ReplyDeleteLiz! You weren't faring so well at the beginning, but you came back really strong! Great points, and great job!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth, you did amazing! I loved your topic and examples, and I could really connect with everything. Your speech was truly inspirational; I think everyone can benefit from it. Great job!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth, great job with your ted talk! You really showed your emotions and that you cared.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the enthusiasm you showed throughout your presentation and how you were able to apply a lot of what we learned in the classroom this year and was able to tell you enjoyed the topics we learned and that it greatly affected you. Great speech and the connections were awesome.
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