I liked the attention getter, it made me excited. I am also a huge fan of princesses and disney movies so I loved the speech, the slides were also really good and clear. You spoke really well and confidently. Good Job!
Kira, you did awesome! Nice intro, and good incorporating audience and humor into your intro. Your topic is very interesting. Try not to have animations for pictures because it could be distracting. Good job incorporating real events into your talk. Try using voice expressions more to make it a bit more interesting. Using Disney movies is very genius. You incorporated interesting facts, with happiness, and lessons that belong to you. Awesome job!
The initial hook was fabulous. Your recovery form slight stumbles was good next time just remember to not say sorry but to just fix it. Your eye contact was excellent as you gazed around at the proper place.
I love this topic! It's so unique and you were so great with the connections to real life. You were so confident and talked so smooth. You have made me feel a lot more confident about giving my talk. Great job Kira!
You did a really good job! I liked your ideas and how you engaged your audience! You looked a little nervous but you did a really good job overall. Good conclusion!
Kira: I really liked your attention getter, and you hand lots of good motion. You speech was a little monotone, but you went a really even speed which is what matters.
You were so confident and comfortable and I really admire that. Speech was easy to understand and clear and straight to the point. Nice how you related fiction (Disney) to the real world (shooting, etc). Your supporting statements backed up your thesis nicely - "We can learn from Disney", then gave examples of personal growth, respect, and attitude.
Kira! Your attention getter was great, and so effective. Your slides perfectly accentuated your points, and the gifs added a nice touch to capture our attention. Great job!!
Nice job it was great! Your topic was so fun and creative and the smile you had on your face during the entire thing really helped your point get across.
Kira, you really got up there and just owned that stag. You got shaky in moments but you pulled right out of it stronger than you were before. You really communicated your point and connected them all so well, you performed absolutely beautifully and it was amazing. Congratulations, you did so well I agree with your points so much. Job well done
Kira: I appreciate your insight into the Disney movies and appreciate the effort you put into writing your speech. I think that you really encouraged the audience to think beyond tradition. Stellar job!
Kira, I love what you chose to make your speech on! Great job using all those quotes to get us involved at the beginning, it was fun. You also showed your passion and excitement towards your talk Great job!
I really liked your attention getter because it really helped to me get interested and involved. I also liked how you didn't give up when you forgot a line or two. It was really relatable for me since I love Disney movies. You did amazing!
Kira, that was amazing! I absolutely love your topic, and I think everyone could connect with the lessons and movies that you pointed out. And you did great at keeping a slow, yet steady pace throughout the whole speech. Great job!
The topic was very outside of the box and I did not think that when this project was assigned, that someone would take on a topic as out there as creativity from Disney. Very well done and definitely showed me a new found respect for Disney movies. A little trip up, but good recovery and well delivered.
I liked the attention getter, it made me excited. I am also a huge fan of princesses and disney movies so I loved the speech, the slides were also really good and clear. You spoke really well and confidently. Good Job!
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ReplyDeleteI loved the way you engaged the audience! Your speech really flowed!
Kira, you did awesome! Nice intro, and good incorporating audience and humor into your intro. Your topic is very interesting. Try not to have animations for pictures because it could be distracting. Good job incorporating real events into your talk. Try using voice expressions more to make it a bit more interesting. Using Disney movies is very genius. You incorporated interesting facts, with happiness, and lessons that belong to you. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteThe initial hook was fabulous. Your recovery form slight stumbles was good next time just remember to not say sorry but to just fix it. Your eye contact was excellent as you gazed around at the proper place.
ReplyDeleteKira: Nice pictures and eye contact. Your message was amazing as well. Overall good job!!
ReplyDeleteI love this topic! It's so unique and you were so great with the connections to real life. You were so confident and talked so smooth. You have made me feel a lot more confident about giving my talk. Great job Kira!
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job! I liked your ideas and how you engaged your audience! You looked a little nervous but you did a really good job overall. Good conclusion!
ReplyDeleteKira: I really liked your attention getter, and you hand lots of good motion. You speech was a little monotone, but you went a really even speed which is what matters.
ReplyDeleteYou were so confident and comfortable and I really admire that. Speech was easy to understand and clear and straight to the point. Nice how you related fiction (Disney) to the real world (shooting, etc). Your supporting statements backed up your thesis nicely - "We can learn from Disney", then gave examples of personal growth, respect, and attitude.
ReplyDeleteKira! Your attention getter was great, and so effective. Your slides perfectly accentuated your points, and the gifs added a nice touch to capture our attention. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job what a creative topic and I loved how you applied it to real life.
ReplyDeleteNice job it was great! Your topic was so fun and creative and the smile you had on your face during the entire thing really helped your point get across.
ReplyDeleteKira, you really got up there and just owned that stag. You got shaky in moments but you pulled right out of it stronger than you were before. You really communicated your point and connected them all so well, you performed absolutely beautifully and it was amazing. Congratulations, you did so well I agree with your points so much. Job well done
ReplyDeleteKira: I appreciate your insight into the Disney movies and appreciate the effort you put into writing your speech. I think that you really encouraged the audience to think beyond tradition. Stellar job!
ReplyDeleteKira, I love what you chose to make your speech on! Great job using all those quotes to get us involved at the beginning, it was fun. You also showed your passion and excitement towards your talk Great job!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! You paced it well and seemed confident despite a few pauses. Great ideas and nice job with audience engagement.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your attention getter because it really helped to me get interested and involved. I also liked how you didn't give up when you forgot a line or two. It was really relatable for me since I love Disney movies. You did amazing!
ReplyDeleteKira- Your visuals were excellent! They really added a story to your talk and helped explain the points you made.
ReplyDeleteI love your topic! Great attention getter- I like how you connected back to it throughout your speech.
ReplyDeleteKira, that was amazing! I absolutely love your topic, and I think everyone could connect with the lessons and movies that you pointed out. And you did great at keeping a slow, yet steady pace throughout the whole speech. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your message. Good job involving the audience and making this speech feel really easy going.
ReplyDeleteThe topic was very outside of the box and I did not think that when this project was assigned, that someone would take on a topic as out there as creativity from Disney. Very well done and definitely showed me a new found respect for Disney movies. A little trip up, but good recovery and well delivered.
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