I really liked your topic, and it really connects to American society, because we are very "busy time" oriented. And your speaking was fluid and interesting. Well formulated idea and plans.
Really good! Your speaking was clear and it was easy to easy to relate to because I think a lot of teenagers go through the same thing.Great job Elena!
I connect to this a lot. I love how you put facts about how important mental health is. You were reay comfortable up there and still had a structured speech. It was really great!
That was amazing, Elena! Your topic and examples were really easy to connect with, and you did a great job conveying the importance of downtime. Great job!
Really great job! Good points and personal connection. Good presentation skills. I like your world wide examples and I could tell that you knew what you were talking about. Good ted challenge and conclusion.
Your topic was not only powerful but delivered with great skill.
Fantastic job! You're topic was really east to relate to
You had a great pace and tone. I liked your topic a lot because it really brought me back to when I was younger and didn't have a phone and spent lots of time outside
That was really good. Good job conveying your ideas in a smart and coherent way. Good job..
Elena: you got your point across extremely well. And had awesome slides overall job well done
Great job and really great stage presence.
Elena: Great job. I agree that we need to take a break from everything. Nice presentation. You conveyed a lot of important points in a very short time.
Elena: you had wonderful audience involvement with cool facts and I really liked your message and expression (both facial and in tone). I totally agree that we need to take a break off of everything, but you should try not to lean back and forth so much. It isn't really that bad because your TED Talk was near to perfect. Awesome job!
Elena my dear, what a wonderful topic to choose- some messages we all definitely needed to hear. So beautifully delivered with complementing hand gestures, great posture, slides that fit your topic, and a great tone of voice matched with perfect pace. We all thoroughly understood, you did such a great job getting up there, so proud of you. Job well done.
Elena: I really liked you topic and the way you spoke and the hand gestures you used were very calm and relaxed, great job!