I loved your attention getter, it makes your whole point so easy to understand. The whole speech was easy to relate to and you spoke calmly and confidently. Really good job!
You spoke slowly and your tone drew in the audience, you used big words which was awesome! You connected to topics that all of us connected to. We loved the humor, it made our day! Good pregnant pauses, if you got lost we couldn't tell. Good facial expression, it wasn't all robot. It was like Sarah Kay's, which is awesome. Hand movement was good too.
Hayden: This was an awesome and inspiring speech. You had great eye contact and kept the audience engaged especially well. Awesome job Hayden!!!
great opener. Your pauses were really powerful and the way your voice levels were really interesting and kept me inspired. I love the way you connected it to students.This actually made me feel less insecure about my indecisions, so it was really inspiring.
You seemed very passionate about your subject and it showed during your Ted talk.
I really liked your message a lot. It was really awesome how you incorporated Claire's sentence into your talk. Your humor really helped ease the tension and you looked so confident when you were up there and you did amazing and asdgdgsds it was so great!!
Great use of voice inflection to show emotion. Your empty slide added to the effect of your speech because it was dark but you may want to add more contrast so it stand out clearer. Finally, your content was great.
Hayden,You incorporated emotion in your speech and you spoke with passion. Your pauses made your speech more effective. One improvement that I would suggest for you is to make sure your slides go with your speech at the end. Overall, really good job!!
Hayden, your talk was very good. I think it was really good how you talk long pauses to let your points resonate with the audience.
Fantastic attention getter- it tied perfectly back into your main idea! I loved how you kept calm the whole time and kept your voice calm and measured.
You put a lot of emphasis on individual words and phrases which made them really stand out to the audience. Your topic seems very personal and it's nice to see you really speak out.
I really loved your creative attention getter. Thank you for being so honest. Your emotion was very good and so was your pacing. I liked how you conveyed your ideas to the audience. Good job
Hayden, you did an amazing job! I am so proud of you! Your tone of voice had such a powerful impact. Your topic was BEAUTIFUL and your final product was gorgeous.
Hayden: As an audience member I could really tell how much emotion you put into your speech and how much you had practiced. Throughout the 5 minutes you were calm and collected and used your pauses to make a point.
Hayden, I really enjoyed the impact in your speech, and appreciated the humor and cheerfulness. I think you really projected yourself, and I admire your ability to put yourself out there. Great job on that front. I think the only area that even needed improvement was that you switched where you were looking too often. Overall though, awesome job.
Hayden you lovely girl, you spoke so elegantly and so beautiful I think you had us all dazed. What an amazing job, you captured your idea so well I think we all deeply understood and felt what you were saying. I will definitely remember what you said and am so glad you said it, you got a little off with your slides but it didn't even matter you spoke with such authority. Well done.
Hayden: You had a wonderful presentation. You had great coordination spped, voice expression, facial expressions, hand movements, pauses, and your topic is wonderful. However, you might want to work on trying not to look at the audience in a sweeping motion, try not to put your hand behind your back, and try to be closer to the box. This means more practice, but you had a wonderful presentation. AWESOME JOB!
Hayden! Your slides perfectly accompanied what your were saying, and it emphasized it and helped get your point across. You were calm and collected, but still passionate. Your point can apply to so many of us, and I loved the way you presented it.
Hayden... WOW! That was utterly and undeniably amazing and every word was so beautifully spoken and your speech was so well rehearsed and I hope you can tell this is a rant because I can't fit all of the good things I have to say in this one comment box. It would take a novel to explain how much VALUE your speech has on helping us understand what makes anything worth our time and attention.
Hayden, you did Amazing!! You spoke nice and slowly, which let the details really sink in, and you spoke with a lot of confidence. I honestly have no advice to give to you. Great job!
You can tell she really knew her speech. She seemed really comfortable speaking in front of everyone and really knew what she was talking about. Easy to understand, easy to follow - really attentive attention getter.
Hayden, I really loved your speech! You did such a good job speaking, using humor, and being so happy, yet you got your point across very well and you were serious when you needed to be. We could tell that you were very passionate about your topics. Great job!
That is such a great topic and your points are so important. Your cadiancewas great
I feel so much better, and more important after listening to the speech. The prop really enhanced the speech, and the pauses were well placed. Excellent work and good job Hayden.