I liked your subject, and it is really relatable. It was also really eye-opening.
I liked the speech but try to stay more still when you are up there you seemed a little nervous when you were touching your hair and pacing a bit. Some of the slides confused me on how they correlated to what you were saying, but I got how they related to the overall theme. Good speaking though, it sounded really good and the content was really good!
You were able to regain your composure after your stumble at the start; nice job. Your use of cartoons brought a little fun to the slide show.Your slides seemed a little rush at times but your speech was still great.
Nice use of facial expressions and audience participation. Cool how you brought in classmates (namely, me, but y'know, whatever). I can tell you rehearsed a lot and you seemed really confident. Nice use of real world examples.
You seemed so calm and I love how you had to the travel pictures behind you it seemed so real. This was really good. I love how you put a bigger more important meaning behind travel. You did a great job.
Grace: Nice topic and nice pictures. Awesome TED challenge
I really liked how you engaged your audience. I really loved how you gave examples that you got from classmates. Good idea! I love your main points. I love how you defined travel in your own words. Good job!
I liked your attention getter, it was cool to here where other people had traveled to. Overall I really liked your talk because I love and am really interested in traveling. Your pacing was also really nice too
I really liked the topic and you did a great job. I also liked the pictures!
Grace,I liked your involvement with the audience at the beginning of your speech. I liked your personal picture of Amy at Korea and Elizabeth in Costa Rica! Toward the end you sped up a little, but it was okay because you got your point across. By the way, I love traveling and I accept your challenge :)
Grace- I thought it was pretty cool that you included stories from the audience. Your idea of travel was unique and really made me think. Overall, great job!
Grace, your incorporation of the audience was wonderful, and I really liked the fact that you have incorporated real life experiences into your topic that everyone can relate to. You have done an awesome job with incorporating pictures of trips and captions. Nice beginning and nice ending.
Your topic was very original and fun! You smiled and talked in a nice relaxed manner and it really got helped support your point.
I love your topic and your visuals really pulled me in and made me want to travel.
Grace, that was amazing! I love your message, and I could easily connect with your examples. I think everyone can benefit from your speech. Great job!
Grace, I really liked your idea of travel! It was great how you talked about how travel can be traveling anywhere, even to your neighbor's house. Great job!
That was a really good speech. It makes me want to go travel and experience new things. Good job.
Grace! Your slides were interesting, and your attention getter was effective. I loved your topic and your points. Great job!
I need to get out more! You made me very curious and more observant of my surroundings. I started to notice small pleasant details and understood what you meant by not having to go far. I am definitely inspired to travel more and get out of America sometime (even though I still love America). Great presentation and you were obviously passionate.